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You want to have artifacts with a high mana value, which make this Hawk hits like a truck
Sure, a Drannith Magistrate is about as safe a stax piece as they come, but land an ill-timed Teferi, Time Raveler and suddenly you are the only player capable of holding back the bevy of opponent win attempts which may be made as the game progresses
This month it seemed right to feature an older card, so without further ado: Mogg of the Month for July 2024 is Goblin Matron
Aside from this, there are some dedicated cards to punish Tron decks, the most powerful ones being Blood Moon and Harbinger of the Seas, which can shut down the deck almost entirely
The Hold Still attack enables Cutiefly to heal ten damage when used, which can temporarily allow Cutiefly to withstand several low-level attacks until it can be evolved into Ribombee